Monday 15 August 2011

(OUTLINE) The Disadvantages of Using Public Transport

Introduction
            1.1 There is many disadvantages of using public transport which is criminal cases will increased , the people cannot go the place they desired freely  , people cannot have comfort in their journey

Body
             2.1 Firstly,the disadvantages of using public transport is the risk of being the criminal victims is high
                        a) many criminal cases is related to public transport such as snatch, raped
                        b) it is dangerous when sitting beside someone that we do not know such in the bus



             2.2 Beside that, when the public using the public transport , they will not feel comfortable when          using the public transport
                        a) some public transport such as bus is usually dirty and smelly
                        b) when there is too many passenger , it is impossible to have a seat although they pay same fare like the others

        

   2.3 In addition , the people also need to wait for a long time to use the public transport

                       a) if they have an emergency , they will arrive their destination late
                       b)people will waste their time during waiting for the public transport instead using their own transport

              2.4 However,there is an advantage of using the public transport
                       a) this method could reduce the percentage of pollution such as air and land
                       b)traffic jam also can be avoided

Conclusion
      3.1 actually it depends on the people whether to use public transport or their own transport because both   of them have their own pro and cons
  
      3.2 the people will prevent from being the criminal victim, they can feel comfortable and no need to wait    for a long time.




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